Aet Lindling

Yeah, thanks for the critiques! I suddenly thought of the tread/trod thing when I was outside, but I forgot about it for a while because I wasn't sure if it ...

The naga!

I haven't read Geezer in ages... what do they look like, again?

Time isn't, in technicalities, a fourth dimension, but one could view it as a dimension. The fourth dimension extends the cube one more. 0-D: Dot. 1-D: Line. 2-D: Square. 3-D: ...

Yes! Fishes is a correct word! Referring to differing species, that is. Just one species, it's "fish". Kinda like bananas being an herb. 'Tis a rare fact most people don't ...

It was pretty good. I like the whole hacking wizards thing, it was new. I think it drew back to a Harry Potter thing every now and then but I ...

Rated PG-13 for "irreverent humor throughout"... what does that even mean? What it means, is the worst PG-13 rating since Whale Rider for a brief glimpse of "drug paraphernalia". Irreverent ...

NO! If that's all, then it's perfect, apparently. Gah... She has this bad habit too! Btw, glad to see you're correcting it Inky. You AREN'T supposed to capitalize that. TRUST ...

yes, I changed it.

The word "smink" came from Staring_at_ceiling in the chatrooms. Me likee, so I decided to create a poem about it. ------ The Smink, one would think, Would be a sort ...

Well, the not a lot of detail bit was on purpose, this takes place in a chat room after all. I liked the basic story too, maybe I'll make another ...

Added a little "goodbye" message at the end.

:lol: (tis really Lavigne, btw. twas misspelled on purpose. this is chatroom, after all) HELP! AVRIL LAVGINE!

Thanks! Yeah, something about that was bugging me. I was paying attention to the time and details more. :lol: righto, I'l probably edit that a bit. Edit: Done.

This is my first attempt at quiet horror, tell me what you think. It's also kind of short, but... whatever. I can't really figure out how it could be much ...